12 openers: here goes!
1. Being a stark contrast to her older sister, Mei Wen is not exactly as demure as she looks…
2. The wind tears through the trees as it makes its way to Sheila’s window. Her screams punish the eerie silence that kept the night dull.. Wails can be heard. knocking. footsteps. silence.
3. Sometimes things aren’t what they always seem. Like a pink penguin in a jacuzzi.
4. Bloodshed and anger. Morning mourns for a new awaking as the sun emerges slowly from the cloudy skies. The show must go on!
5. They zip through the oncoming traffic as cars swerve and screech. The mobsters are still hot on their heels! Beng Hoot holds the black bag closer towards his body as he maneuvers his bike hastily to the market.
6. The lady aims her gun at the punk’s head. The hunter is now the hunted. Terence burst into the room, “No! Put the gun down, Mei Jun! The law will deal with him!”
7. The stadium rumbles under thousands pairs of feet as the crowd rise steadily to anticipate.
8. The critic holds his pen tighter as he savour the delicacy placed before him. He takes a bite as the kitchen crew looks on intently.
9. Pan Wei holds on to both wires as everyone else tries to escape. One wire would bring peace once again. However, one wrong move will cause chaos and mayhem. Death and blood. “What should I do?”
10. Tom could have sworn that he was there. Nobody will believe him. He decides to prove all of them wrong.
11. Hisham was all wired up as he approaches the building. Instruction is clear. Get in and show it to them.
12.Miriam hurriedly looks through all the mail she’d received. As she rummages through the envelopes, an envelope falls to the ground. Without much notice, she reaches down to pick it up. Just then, there was a loud knock on the door and the door flung open. Miriam looks up to see a tall, bulky man dressed in black with a grim look on his face.
Remember you present tense / 3rd person! 2 and 4 are messed up in terms of tenses. 5 is a good opener but there are tense errors as well. Now, I’m thinking you have the other 7 openers in a notebook somewhere and you just have to transcribe them onto the blog right?
alright! corrected some of the mistakes and completed the thing.. Dang.. my tenses suck!
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